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The quality of Life in big cities is a worsening what do you think the reason or what can you suggest for solution.

The quality of Life in big cities is a worsening what do you think the reason or what can you suggest for solution. BJD2p
Nowadays, detrimental problems are increasing which effect on the directly mankind. Ghe standard life is becoming devastation in a Metropolitan. In this essay will analyse most serious reasons and also solution in which the situation can be improved. Possibly the main reason is, environmental issue is the play pivotal role in ruin people's life. In explanation, myriad amalgamation of a bacteria are increasing because of that human is dumping garbage and plastic everywhere and this tiny insect would readily mix in a water or a food. Therefore, it tends to be prelious problem to health such as a food poisoning and other plethora ailments. A further serious concern is, air pollution rising due to industrialisation and traffic congestion. In addition to, arduous chemical companies exhaust inimical emitting in the air and people would be breathing this contaminated Air which effect is a poison on a body. Thus, individual can be suffered from a long cancer and breathing problems. For example Indian World Health Organisation claim that, people who lived around Industrial Area they have severaly risk of a cancer. Turning to the potential solution, people can curb the environmental problem by measuring some steps. Furthermore, government should cultivation programmes of awareness of a gravest problem occurred through dumping waste anywhere and also authority ought to proper management of waste in order to make clean City. Another remedy is, Industrial Area should be shifted on a suburban part. Therefore, its harmful gases will not be more affected on human. To conclude, pollution of a land and contaminated air will definitely destroy the quality of a life. However, government and public can enhance their standard life by emulate rules.
Nowadays, detrimental
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problems
are increasing which effect on the
directly
mankind.
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Ghe
standard
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life
is becoming devastation in a Metropolitan. In this essay will
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analyse
most serious reasons and
also
solution in which the situation can be
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improved
.

Possibly
the main reason is, environmental issue is the play pivotal role in ruin
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people
's
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life
. In explanation, myriad amalgamation of
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a bacteria
are increasing
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because
of that human is dumping garbage and plastic everywhere and this tiny insect would
readily
mix in a water or
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a food
.
Therefore
, it tends to be
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prelious
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problem
to health such as a food poisoning and other plethora ailments. A
further
serious concern is,
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air
pollution rising due to
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industrialisation
and traffic congestion.
In addition
to, arduous chemical
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companies
exhaust inimical emitting in the
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air
and
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people
would be breathing this contaminated
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Air
which effect is a poison on a body.
Thus
, individual can
be suffered
from a long cancer and breathing
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problems
.
For example
Indian World Health
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Organisation
claim that,
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people
who
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lived
around Industrial Area they have
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severaly
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risk
of a cancer.

Turning to the potential solution,
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people
can curb the environmental
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problem
by measuring
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some
steps.
Furthermore
,
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government
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should cultivation
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programmes
of awareness of
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a
gravest
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problem
occurred through dumping waste anywhere and
also
authority ought to proper management of waste in order to
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make
clean City. Another remedy is, Industrial Area should
be shifted
on a suburban part.
Therefore
, its harmful gases will not be more
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affected
on human.

To conclude
, pollution of a land and contaminated
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air
will definitely
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destroy
the quality of a
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life
.
However
,
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government
and public can enhance their standard
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life
by emulate
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rules
.
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IELTS essay The quality of Life in big cities is a worsening what do you think the reason or what can you suggest for solution.

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  American English
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