Undoubtedly, advertisements are ubiquitous these days. It is argued that rise in selling of common commodities is the influence of ads not by the demand of people. However, I completely agree with the statement that top brands persuade consumer in a particular way and romanticized ads to catch people’s fancy.
Firstly, commercials contaminate people minds to buy a product, whether it is vital for them or not because they inculcate in their thoughts that in order to be happy this is essential. For instance, a tourist company in Japan offers special 5 days and 4 night services in a hilly area they came up with the slogan that throw you frustrations and worries here, whereas people start believing that this is the sole solution to deter with their concerns. In other words, special tactics are used to augment their sales and attract people to quest for their happiness.
Secondly, advertising companies are using extreme graphics and target certain audience. Ads in the market are solely made for the audience. For example, cloth selling companies hire beautiful and attractive models to target female gender for increasing their sale. Moreover ladies start fantasizing that they will look more beautiful similar to these models but in reality ad agencies use photoshop software to edit these pictures and these models are professional and they maintain their body and health so that they look charming.
In conclusion, nowadays, effect of advertisements are clearly seen in sales of products despite the need of the nation due to high influencing commercial to target specific audience and they follow them blindly.
Undoubtedly
, advertisements are ubiquitous these days. It
is argued
that rise in selling of common commodities is the influence of ads not by the demand of
people
.
However
, I completely
agree
with the statement that top brands persuade consumer in a particular way and romanticized ads to catch
people’s
fancy.
Firstly
, commercials contaminate
people
minds to
buy
a product, whether it is vital for them or not
because
they inculcate in their thoughts that in order to be happy this is essential.
For instance
, a tourist
company
in Japan offers special 5 days and 4 night services in a hilly area they came up with the slogan that throw you frustrations and worries here, whereas
people
start
believing that this is the sole solution to deter with their concerns.
In other words
, special tactics are
used
to augment their sales and attract
people
to quest for their happiness.
Secondly
, advertising
companies
are using extreme graphics and target certain audience. Ads in the market are
solely
made for the audience.
For example
, cloth selling
companies
hire
beautiful
and attractive models to target female gender for increasing their sale.
Moreover
ladies
start
fantasizing that they will look more
beautiful
similar to these models
but
in reality ad agencies
use
photoshop software to edit these pictures and these models are
professional and
they maintain their body and health
so
that they look charming.
In conclusion
, nowadays, effect of advertisements are
clearly
seen
in sales of products despite the need of the nation due to high influencing commercial to target specific
audience and
they follow them
blindly
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes