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Today's schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?

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Children are supposed to learn curriculum systems at schools such as mathematics, history and art are beneficial to start their independent life. Yet, some people debate that it is absolutely vital to enhance for young people to understand financially important difficulties at education centres. I completely agree with this agreement to several notions. To begin with, as many argue that math has a significant impact on people's life as it assist you to adopt your financial way of how to devote your investments. To illustrate this, the majority of Japanese adolescents are taught specific subjects like this, can be a tangible example to prove my view. Furthermore, economics is the best extra-curricular activity that helps you how to fund or save your money. This, these facilities are the most essential source of entering financial way. On the other hand, we should also remember that history is another method of getting particular information of how to survive financially in the world. This is because some people just learn finance through history as it displays of evolution of financial world in the last few decades. In these all examples mentioned above, you will be able to develop your discussion and would be capable of dealing with economical problems in your lives. By way of conclusion, training school students in financial matters would be very useful. Although establishing this content of the syllabus requires much more money, the community will benefit from students being better prepared for adult life.

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