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Today's families eat favourite meal together why is this is this positive and negative Trend.

Today's families eat favourite meal together why is this is this positive and negative Trend. jQOM8
A gap between family relationships recorded from recent years as they do not eat their meal together. Thepmaterialistic lifestyle of individual make their day night casual more visit with the fully work and many other factor also support this notion. However, I believe it leads to negative enhancement. This essay for the explain my point of views regarding the suspect in subsequent paragraphs. Analysing the statement and explaining father, first and foremost, in these days people have less away time because they are main busy they have to schedule from early morning till midnight at the workplace. Due to inflation in modern world, for surviving a better life in a family both parents have to do job. Thus, there are certain to do not match with other family members either they want to eat or not together. The another par Vittal fact is the technology majority of words give preference to watch TV mobile phones whenever they eat dinner or lunch and the give first priority to eat alone sand sometimes the eat outside. As a result there are fewer occasion take place in life of modern man when they eat together meals with their living ones. Nevertheless, why considered to be a negative Trend? the main prominent one is that it is a cultural factor to eat with the closer once by sitting together. Because, Deccan captured precious movement while sharing their joy and sorrow with their family members whenever they eat together paradoxically eating a loan not only break their family born but also new generation totally forget the importance of eating meals with the family. In conclusion, there is no doubt that family plays an indispensable role in life of inhabitants life and it is a good habit to eat together with the dear and near ones. But nowadays modern generation totally forget it so parents should encourage theirwere lovely ones to eat dinner together.
A gap between
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family
relationships recorded from recent years as they do not
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eat
their meal together.
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Thepmaterialistic
lifestyle of individual
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make
their day night casual more visit with the
fully
work and
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many
other factor
also
support this notion.
However
, I believe it leads to
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negative
enhancement. This essay for the
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explain
my point of views regarding the suspect in subsequent paragraphs.
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Analysing
the statement and explaining father,
first
and foremost, in these days
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people
have less away time
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because
they are main busy they
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have to
schedule from early morning till midnight at the workplace. Due to inflation in modern world, for surviving a better
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life
in a
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family
both parents
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have to
do job.
Thus
, there are certain to do not match with other
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family
members either they want to
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eat
or not together. The another par
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Vittal
fact is the technology majority of words give preference to
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watch
TV mobile phones whenever they
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eat
dinner or lunch and the give
first
priority to
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eat
alone sand
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sometimes
the
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eat
outside.
As a result
there are fewer occasion take place in
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life
of modern
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man
when they
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eat
together meals with their living
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ones
.
Nevertheless
, why considered to be a
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negative
Trend?
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the
main prominent one is that it is a cultural factor to
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eat
with the closer once by sitting together.
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Because
, Deccan captured precious movement while sharing their joy and sorrow with their
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family
members whenever they
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eat
together
paradoxically
eating a loan not
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only
break their
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family
born
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but
also
new generation
totally
forget the importance of eating meals with the
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family
.
In conclusion
, there is no doubt that
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family
plays an indispensable role in
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life
of inhabitants
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life
and it is a
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good
habit to
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eat
together with the dear and near
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ones
.
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But
nowadays modern generation
totally
forget it
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so
parents should encourage
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theirwere
lovely
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ones
to
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eat
dinner together.
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IELTS essay Today's families eat favourite meal together why is this is this positive and negative Trend.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
318 words
5.5
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