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Intelligent machine such as robot are widely Applied to take the place discuss advantage or disadvantage

Intelligent machine such as robot are widely Applied to take the place discuss advantage or disadvantage a81b9

Nowadays technology increase day by day in all over the word such as computer, mobiles as well as robots so on. Machines plays crucial role in everyone life but there are some merits and demerits also. In present advantage has outweigh the disadvantages. To commence with, modern technology has inclined at present. firstly Machine makes easier life of human because today's everyone has busy schedule their has no enough time for go to market for shopping. Secondly, during of pandemic technology plays vital role for single person because masses purchase basic needs from online. Moreover, there are some demerits of modern technology. Firstly, human totally depend upon gadgets like cell phone and people become lazy also. For instance, masses ignore Go outside and everything order from internet. Majority of people prefer to online shopping nowadays. Secondly, children ignore their study because of online gaming and social media so on. For instance, during covid period every school has given online classes consequences parents provides cell phone for their children then they are totally depend on it. To sum up, although gadgets have some demerits but without this life are impossible because it makes easier and happier life of human

Nowadays You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 increase day by day in Did you mean "all over the world" (=globally)?all over the world
all over the word
 such as computer, mobiles as well
 as robots This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "Machine plays" or "Machines play".Machine playsMachines play
Machines plays
 crucial role in everyone You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 merits and demerits also
. In present advantage has Use past participle here: "outweighed".outweighed
outweigh
 the disadvantages.

To commence with, modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 has inclined at present. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFirstly
firstly


Machine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 easier You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 of human This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's everyone has busy schedule their has no This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 time for go to market for shopping. Secondly
, during of pandemic You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
 plays vital role for single person This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 masses This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 basic needs from online.

Moreover
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 demerits of modern You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmachineryautomation
technology
. Firstly
, human totally
 depend upon gadgets like cell phone and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 become lazy also
. For instance
, masses This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore


Go outside and everything order from internet. Majority of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 prefer to online shopping nowadays. Secondly
, children This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore
 their study This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of online gaming and social media This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. For instance
, during Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
covid
 period every school has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 online classes consequences parents provides cell phone for their children then they are totally
Consider using a past participle here: "depended".depended
depend
 on it.

To sum up, although gadgets have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 demerits This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 without this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 are impossible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 easier and happier You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 of human