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today, there are a lot of websites providing news in the internet. some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, due to rapid advancement in technology, number of news websites are swelling at enormous rate. Some people assert that these development will replace the traditional method of newspaper and magazines in near future. However, I personally believe that this websites will definitely reduce the usage of newspapers but cannot able to diminish its existence. There are several reasons why uses of newspaper never impoverish. Firstly, newspaper and magazines are cheap and easily accessible and one may able to carry it anywhere with them. Secondly, a number of people are not computer-savvy so reading news on the internet may be not their cup of tea. Thirdly, plenty of people in the world are dailybread-earners so to purchase such expensive mobile phones and computers are not feasible for them. For instance, people living in rural area are deprived of such internet services as their is always numerous network issues in that area. On the other hand, people also suggest that reading news on the internet benefited them in many ways. Firstly, news can be interpret from any corner of the world. Secondly, a number materials can be downloaded and stored for further reference which in turn, ultimately alleviate the use of newspaper and magazines. In conclusion, undoubtedly, there are ample of advantages of news websites which may reflect in usage of traditional method of newspaper but never deteriorate its actuality.
Nowadays, due to rapid advancement in technology, number of
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news
websites are swelling at enormous rate.
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Some
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people
assert that
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these development
will replace the traditional method of
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newspaper
and magazines in near future.
However
, I
personally
believe that
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this
websites will definitely
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reduce
the usage of
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newspapers
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but
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cannot able
to diminish its existence.

There are several reasons why
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uses
of
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newspaper
never impoverish.
Firstly
,
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newspaper
and magazines are
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cheap
and
easily
accessible and one
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may able
to carry it anywhere with them.
Secondly
, a number of
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people
are not computer-savvy
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so
reading
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news
on the internet may be not their cup of tea.
Thirdly
,
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plenty
of
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people
in the world are
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dailybread-earners
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so
to
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purchase
such expensive mobile phones and computers are not feasible for them.
For instance
,
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people
living in rural area
are deprived
of such internet services as
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their
is always numerous network issues in that area.

On the other hand
,
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people
also
suggest that reading
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news
on the internet benefited them in
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many
ways.
Firstly
,
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news
can be
Consider using the past participle “interpreted”.
interpret
from any corner of the world.
Secondly
, a
Did you mean “number of”?
number
materials can
be downloaded
and stored for
further
reference which in turn,
ultimately
alleviate the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of
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newspaper
and magazines.

In conclusion
,
undoubtedly
, there are ample of advantages of
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news
websites which may reflect in usage of traditional method of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
never deteriorate its actuality.

IELTS essay today, there are a lot of websites providing news in the internet. some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines.

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4 paragraphs
229 words
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