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Since industrialization, the threat of fossil fuels to the environment has been a major issue.

Since industrialization, the threat of fossil fuels to the environment has been a major issue. It has been suggested by many that the most effective solution to this problem is to raise the price of fuel. However, I believe that this would not be a wise solution. This essay will outline the possible effects of increasing the price of fuel and discuss the proper ways to solve the problem from my perspective. First, increasing the price of fuel will drastically worsen the current situation. This is due to the fact increasing the price of fuel will have a direct impact on the economy. The things that people use in their daily lives are mostly produced in factories that rely on heavily on fuel for their processing. Transportation is one of the key industries that will be affected significantly by these changes. For example, when fuel prices went up in India, it affected the ticket prices, vegetables, meat, food, and all the other essentials of daily life which require transportation to distribution. With this in mind, it is clear that increasing the price of fuel is not a viable solution. Secondly, an increase in the price cannot alleviate the worsening environmental problems. This reason is that raise in fuel prices do not reduce ever-increasing demand from the various sector of society. Because most of the essential that required for daily life cannot be avoided. This in turn leads to further problems and the environmental problem will remain as it is. The exact solution for this dilemma is to find the root cause of the problem. Burning fuels are harmful to nature, so the focus should be on finding an alternative green fuel and will not affect nature For example, Solar has proved to be an excellent alternative for green energy and already adapted by many countries. Consequently, it is undoubtedly clear that an increase in the prices of fuels is not at all solution to solve the environmental issuse.
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to the environment has been a major issue. It has
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that the most effective
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solution
to this
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problem
is to raise the
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price
of
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fuel
.
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solution
. This essay will outline the possible effects of
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increasing
the
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price
of
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fuel
and discuss the proper ways to solve the
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problem
from my perspective.

First
,
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increasing
the
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of
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fuel
will
drastically
worsen the
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current
situation. This is due to the fact
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increasing
the
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price
of
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fuel
will have a direct impact on the economy. The things that
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people
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use
in their daily
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lives
are
mostly
produced in factories that rely on
heavily
on
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fuel
for their processing. Transportation is one of the key industries that will be
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affected
significantly
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fuel
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prices
went up in India, it
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affected
the ticket
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prices
, vegetables, meat, food, and all the other essentials of daily life which require transportation to distribution. With this in mind, it is
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clear
that
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the
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fuel
is not a viable solution.

Secondly
, an increase in the
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price
cannot alleviate the worsening environmental
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problems
. This reason is that raise in
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fuel
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prices
do not
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reduce
ever-increasing demand from the various sector of society.
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Because
most of the essential that required for daily life cannot
be avoided
. This in turn leads to
further
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problems
and the environmental
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problem
will remain as it is. The exact
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solution
for this dilemma is to find the root cause of the
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problem
. Burning
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fuels
are harmful to nature,
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so
the focus should be on finding an alternative green
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fuel
and will not affect nature
For example
, Solar has proved to be an excellent alternative for green energy and already adapted by
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many
countries.
Consequently
, it is
undoubtedly
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clear
that an increase in the
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prices
of
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fuels
is not at all
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solution
to solve the environmental
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IELTS essay Since industrialization, the threat of fossil fuels to the environment has been a major issue.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
328 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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