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Today people are working for very long hours. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it? Give reasons and examples for your answer.

Today people are working for very long hours. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it? Give reasons and examples for your answer. bQpDP

Nowadays, a great number of peoples are toiling at different jobs for extensive hours. Just like everything else, it has both pros and cons. This essay will discuss the positive and negative impact of this situation. To commence with, daily expense of a family has been rising day by day, such as the money spend an grocery and fuel. Employers with less salary work on earning more money by doing overtime to add extra money to their salaries. For example, some organizations provide allies to motivate those who work late night and after working hours.

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IELTS essay Today people are working for very long hours. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it? Give reasons and examples for your answer.

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

95 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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