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we have caught up with sophisticated and modern things as well as having forgotten meaningful and priceless cultures from our ancestors accidentally.

we have caught up with sophisticated and modern things as well as having forgotten meaningful and priceless cultures from our ancestors accidentally. Yy0wK
In a congested society, we have caught up with sophisticated and modern things as well as having forgotten meaningful and priceless cultures from our ancestors accidentally. To help you look back on unforgettable moments, Nguoc, which is your time machine, will discover the flow from past to present. Therefore, the youth will have opportunities to broaden their horizons about worthy traditions. As a result, it will be preserved and developed by the residents in all circumstances.
In a congested society, we have caught up with sophisticated and modern things
as well
as having forgotten meaningful and priceless cultures from our ancestors
accidentally
.

To
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help
you look back on unforgettable moments,
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Nguoc
, which is your time machine, will discover the flow from past to present.
Therefore
, the youth will have opportunities to broaden their horizons about worthy traditions.
As a result
, it will
be preserved
and developed by the residents in all circumstances.

IELTS essay we have caught up with sophisticated and modern things as well as having forgotten meaningful and priceless cultures from our ancestors accidentally.

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2 paragraphs
76 words
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