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Today,people are working at home rather than in the workplace,but some thinks it can brings stress if they do work at home

Today, people are working at home rather than in the workplace, but some thinks it can brings stress if they do work at home xx1jw
Irrefutably, in present scenario people are working at home rather than in the workplace but some argue that, it can bring stress. I partly agree with the notion. To begin with, people no need to go for one place to other. To illustrate it, they can save their time and money. Hence folks can spend time with family. In clear in today hectic life people are very busy with their work. Conclusion, they should work at both places
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. I partly
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with the notion. To
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people
no need to go for one place to other. To illustrate it, they can save their time and money.
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Hence
folks can spend time with family. In
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hectic life
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busy with their work. Conclusion, they should work at both places
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IELTS essay Today, people are working at home rather than in the workplace, but some thinks it can brings stress if they do work at home

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
77 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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