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Today people are more and more inclined to immigrate to other countries, what do you think about this issue and what is the reason for them to immigrate?

Today people are more and more inclined to immigrate to other countries, what do you think about this issue and what is the reason for them to immigrate? 7Wnmk
There are various causes resulting in immigration. The main reason is that they move to another countries in search of a better life. Some people living in political persecution or war countries causing them to suffer a lot of damage both mentally and physically, issues of rights and freedoms all of those make them want to escape that place. They look forward to a better place to seek educational and employment opportunities, from that, they can increase the living standardWhy do people immigrate?
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IELTS essay Today people are more and more inclined to immigrate to other countries, what do you think about this issue and what is the reason for them to immigrate?

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