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a review movie you love it.

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In this time, I have spent time watching a movie to relax after lesson at school. This movie, which I am recently watching a film" The only you''. The film is famous in VTV, attract many people to see a movie. Consequently, this movie was touched my feeling, I really engross to it. This movie is very successful with contribution of the actress, artist. Firstly, the main actress in succession gained award of VTV in third season. She has consistent in her career, thus, she sail through anti-fan with your abuse comment. Secondly, she has interest in her work so she can do well it. Besides, she also get support from her family, they had made motivation immense for her. In conclusion, this movie brought in many lesson about responsible, life, try to overcome changllenge, hardships.
In this time, I have spent time watching a
movie
to relax after lesson at school. This
movie
, which I am recently watching a film
"
The
only
you''. The film is
famous
in
VTV
, attract
many
people
to
see
a
movie
.
Consequently
, this
movie
was touched
my feeling, I
really
engross to it.

This
movie
is
very
successful with contribution of the actress, artist.
Firstly
, the main actress in succession gained award of
VTV
in third season. She has consistent in her career,
thus
, she
sail
through anti-fan with your abuse comment.

Secondly
, she has interest in her work
so
she can do well it.
Besides
, she
also
get
support from her family, they had made motivation immense for her.

In conclusion
, this
movie
brought in
many lesson
about responsible, life, try to overcome
changllenge
, hardships.
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IELTS essay a review movie you love it.

Essay
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