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comparision of plans of public park of 1920 and today

comparision of plans of public park of 1920 and today 1VW9G

The plans below illustrate that development of public park named Grange park over the years. Overall, whole infrastructure of the park is change compared to its original one which was in 1920, THE only exception is its entrances. It is evident from the plans that, this public park was first open in 1920 with two entrances on the opposite sides named Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street with fountain located in between. According to the plan, two rose gardens were there on the either side of the entrances from Arnold Avenue, while one was located nearby on the Eldon entrances with stage for musicians between two gardens on the east side with some seats placed for visitors. Furthermore, in the west side, there was pond for water plants at the end of the park, while on the opposite side of it, a glasshouse was constructed. Talking about park's development, in the east side, stage for musicians is replaced with amphitheatre for concerts. Moreover, fountain was replaced by rose garden which is surrounded by seats, while there is complete makeover in the west side of the park as cafe is opened instead of rose garden near the entrances of Arnold Avenue. In addition, there is wide children's play area and glasshouse is removed and water feature is added, further, also there is a separate entrance for underground car park is made. Hence, this public park is organized in better manner now compare to 1920.

The plans below illustrate that development of public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 named Grange The singular proper name 'Grange' must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "parks", "parked".parksparked
park
 over the years.

Overall
, whole infrastructure of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 compared to its original one which was in 1920, THE This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 exception is its entrances.

It is evident from the plans that, this public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 was first
 open in 1920 with two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrances
 on the opposite You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
 named Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street with fountain located in between. According to the plan, two rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
gardens
 were there on the either side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrances
 from Arnold Avenue, while one was located
 nearby on the Eldon You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrances
 with stage for musicians between two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
gardens
 on the east side with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 seats placed for visitors. Furthermore
, in the west side, there was pond for water plants at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, while on the opposite side of it, a glasshouse was constructed
. Talking about park's development, in the east side, stage for musicians is replaced
 with Possible spelling mistake. 'amphitheatre' is British English.amphitheater
amphitheatre
 for concerts. Moreover
, fountain was replaced
 by rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 which is surrounded
 by seats, while there is complete makeover in the west side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 as 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
is opened
instead
 of rose You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 near the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrances
 of Arnold Avenue. In addition
, Did you mean "there are wide children"?there are wide children
there is wide children
's play area and glasshouse is removed
 and water feature is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
, further
, also
 there is a separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhallwayporchdooropeningentrywayport
entrance
 for underground car You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
is made
. Hence
, this public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
is organized
 in better manner This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 compare to 1920. 