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ielts essay as accommodation and transportation facilities are increasing industries are encouraged by government to settle in rural area.

ielts essay as accommodation and transportation facilities are increasing industries are encouraged by government to settle in rural area. 0MRQB

In this developing world, Government is persuading various industries to get settle down at countryside as result of overpopulation in city centre. According to my mind, advantages of this are outweigh than its disadvantages. First and foremost, it is intuitively obvious that, factories are prone to fatal incidents which risk lives of nearby public. For instance, fire accident in Bhopal factory cause death of 200 residents. Consequently, this fear will get reduced by shifting of companies to rural areas. Secondly, waste treatment can be done viably due to presence of large area and without affecting environment and people's health as these methods would be eco-friendly which are not possible in congested area of a town. Furthermore, it will also prevent downtown to get overcrowded by Providing more employment opportunities to village dwellers as they wouldn't have to move to cities in search of work to become financially stable. This decision will prove beneficial for plants themselves as it will reduce the transportation cost required to collect natural raw material from number of areas in underdeveloped places. Overall, it is a beneficial step taken by higher authorities to ask corporations to move to rural areas which is in favour of mankind, environment and proper development of nation.

In this developing world, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 is persuading various industries to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 settle down at countryside as result of overpopulation in city Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. According to my mind, advantages of this are Consider using a past participle here: "outweighed".outweighed
outweigh
 than its disadvantages. First
 and foremost, it is intuitively
 obvious that, factories are prone to fatal incidents which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazarddanger
risk
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 of nearby public. For instance
, fire accident in Bhopal factory cause death of 200 residents. Consequently
, this fear will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 by shifting of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 to rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. Secondly
, waste treatment can be done
viably
 due to presence of large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and without affecting environment and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's health as these methods would be eco-friendly which are not possible in congested You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of a town. Furthermore
, it will also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 downtown to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 overcrowded by Providing more employment opportunities to village dwellers as they wouldn't This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to cities in search of work to become financially
 stable. This decision will prove beneficial for plants themselves as it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the transportation cost required to collect natural raw material from number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 in underdeveloped places. Overall
, it is a beneficial step taken by higher authorities to ask corporations to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 which is in Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 of mankind, environment and proper development of nation. 