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Today more people visit Sahara and Antarctica. Give benefits and disadvantages.

Today more people visit Sahara and Antarctica. Give benefits and disadvantages. wnRdr

In present days, more ana more visitors are going to the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic where conditions are dangerous. This essay will argue that although we get benefited by taking lots of information about this region, we have disadvantage also that we should have health related issues. On the one hand, when we visit the hot or cold region, we can get knowledge about the life of living creatures. In other words, we can get knowledge that how they survive. For example, a recent survey shows that every year many people go to the Sahara Desert and see that how the living things survive without food. In this way they give food packets to them. On the other hand, these places are not suitable for human beings because they have yo face problems to survive. For instance, The Times Of India reported last week that there was a gradual increase in the number of humankind every year to see the Antarctica, but they became ill there. In this region, you do not find any medical centre at all unless you have some ideas because there are very few people live. In conclusion, while we go to a journey in this particular two types if region, you will become aware about life of living beings, illness become more significant, as there are such environment for living.

In present days, more Possible spelling mistake found.AnaandananyAnnaRNA
ana
 more visitors are going to the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic where conditions are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
. This essay will argue that although we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 benefited by taking lots of information about this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincesectorlandneighborhooddistrictzone
region
, we have disadvantage also
 that we should have health related issues.

On the one hand, when we visit the hot or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chillyfrosty
cold
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region
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 knowledge about the life of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 creatures. In other words
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 knowledge that how they survive. For example
, a recent survey This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that every year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 go to the Sahara Desert and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that how the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 things survive without food. In this way they give food packets to them.

On the other hand
, these places are not suitable for human beings This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they have Did you mean "to", "you" or "your"?toyouyour
yo
 face problems to survive. For instance
, If the term is a proper noun, use the suggested capitalization.The Times of India
The Times Of India
 reported last week that there was a gradual increase in the number of humankind every year to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the Antarctica, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they became ill there. In this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincesectorlandneighborhooddistrictzone
region
, you do not find any medical Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 at all unless you have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
.

In conclusion
, while we go to The usual preposition for "a journey" with a named destination is "to". Did you mean "a trip to"?a trip to
a journey in
 this particular two types if You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincesectorlandneighborhooddistrictzone
region
, you will become aware about life of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
 beings, illness become more significant, as there are such environment for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathingcontemporary
living
. 