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Now many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What are the problems associated with it? What are the solutions to these problems?

Now many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What are the problems associated with it? What are the solutions to these problems? aqkKP
Cities all over the world are expanding. The problems associated with this development will be discussed in this essay along with the feasible measures which can be used to tackle these issues. The expansion of cities is resulting in alarming issues. When cities become bigger, their population will also grow. This can lead to unemployment if there are not enough job opportunities for all. When the population of cities increases, the demand for housing and other facilities will also increase. More construction work will worsen the already alarming pollution levels and affect the livability in cities. More pollution means more health problems in people and reduced life expectancy. The increased demand for homes will make prices unaffordable and poor and middle class families will be forced to move to the suburbs. This will not be a problem if they can find a job near their home but that rarely happens. As most jobs are concentrated in the city centre, suburban people will have to travel all the way to downtown every day and this will worsen the traffic situation. Obviously, an expanding city is not exactly a positive development. Decentraliation is the key to tackling these issues. The government should encourage industries to move to suburbs and rural areas. If more jobs are available there, few people will want to move to cities. This will reduce population in cities and take the load off their fragile infrastructure. The government can offer companies various incentives to set up their factories in small towns and villages. The government should also build faster modes of transport between rural and urban areas to facilitate quicker movement of people and goods. In conclude, when cities expand, they become less and less livable. In order to prevent this, the government should create more job opportunities in rural and semi-urban areas. This will discourage people from migrating and ensure the all round development of the country.
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Cities
all over the world are expanding. The problems associated with this development will
be discussed
in this essay along with the feasible measures which can be
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used
to tackle these issues.

The expansion of
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cities
is resulting in alarming issues. When
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cities
become bigger, their population will
also
grow. This can lead to unemployment if there are not
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enough
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job
opportunities for all. When the population of
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cities
increases, the demand for housing and other facilities will
also
increase. More construction work will worsen the already alarming pollution levels and affect the livability in
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cities
. More pollution means more health problems in
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people
and
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reduced
life expectancy. The increased demand for homes will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
prices unaffordable and poor and middle
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class
families will
be forced
to
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move
to the suburbs. This will not be a problem if they can find a
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job
near their home
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but
that rarely happens. As most
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jobs
are concentrated
in the city
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centre
, suburban
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people
will
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have to
travel all the way to downtown every day and this will worsen the traffic situation.
Obviously
, an expanding city is not exactly a
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positive
development.

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Decentraliation
is the key to tackling these issues. The
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government
should encourage industries to
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move
to suburbs and rural areas. If more
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jobs
are available there, few
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people
will want to
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move
to
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cities
. This will
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reduce
population in
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cities
and take the load off their fragile infrastructure. The
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government
can offer
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companies
various incentives to set up their factories in
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small
towns and villages. The
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government
should
also
build faster modes of transport between rural and urban areas to facilitate quicker movement of
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people
and
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goods
.

In conclude, when
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cities
expand, they become less and less livable. In order to
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prevent
this, the
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government
should create more
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job
opportunities in rural and semi-urban areas. This will discourage
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people
from migrating and ensure the all round development of the country.
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IELTS essay Now many big cities in the world are increasing in size. What are the problems associated with it? What are the solutions to these problems?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
5.5
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