Tourism now shares a major part in an economy's growth. In the contemporary era, More tourists are like to visit places where there is difficult to find resources to explore the lives of pupils living there. This essay will discuss what are the advantages and drawback of this tourism.
To embark on, Traveller contributes a lot in an income in developing and underdeveloped countries like Africa. For instance, Sahara desert has become one of the great spots of attraction for tourists. They like to travel there to see their culture and heritage, and also, what makes them popular. These reason help a lot to the local people as they get jobs if more people will visit, there will be more vaccines to appoint and thus, the unemployment rate will decrease as well. Another reason is they get the resources easily available. The government will also build hotels and many other amenities to attract more pupils which ultimately benefit the people living there. Thus, tourist are a pivotal source of income as well advantage of society.
Instead of so many features it has some disadvantages like the scare of resources and materials. for example, in places like Sahara desert or Antarctic there is already a shortage of water and electricity if there will be more people coming there it will create problem for locals which is not a good option. Thus, life will become harder than before for them.
To recapitulate, Though Having so many positive side, it has somehow had negative side too, but if the authorities will maintain the proper balance in both then hardly anyone can suffer and both side locals as well Government both will be having benefit out of it.
Tourism
now
shares a major part in an economy's growth. In the contemporary era, More tourists are like to visit places where there is difficult to find resources to explore the
lives
of pupils living there. This essay will discuss what are the advantages and drawback of this tourism.
To embark on,
Traveller
contributes a lot in an income in developing and underdeveloped countries like Africa.
For instance
, Sahara desert has become one of the great spots of attraction for tourists. They like to travel there to
see
their culture and heritage, and
also
, what
makes
them popular. These reason
help
a lot to the local
people
as they
get
jobs if more
people
will visit, there will be more vaccines to appoint and
thus
, the unemployment rate will decrease
as well
. Another reason is they
get
the resources
easily
available. The
government
will
also
build hotels and
many
other amenities to attract more pupils which
ultimately
benefit the
people
living there.
Thus
, tourist are a pivotal source of income
as well
advantage of society.
Instead
of
so
many
features it has
some
disadvantages like the scare of resources and materials.
for
example, in places
like Sahara desert
or Antarctic there is already a shortage of water and electricity if there will be more
people
coming there it will create problem for locals which is not a
good
option.
Thus
, life will become harder than
before
for them.
To recapitulate, Though Having
so
many
positive
side, it has somehow had
negative
side too,
but
if the authorities will maintain the proper balance in both then hardly anyone can suffer and both side locals
as well
Government
both will be having benefit out of it.
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4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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