An increasing number of people would like to visit areas of extreme condition, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic or the Mountain Everest. This could leave the impressive experiences in a person's life, but it also exists some risks during the journey.
Visiting places of difficult conditions can give people a unique experience. This is because extreme conditional areas are not the places that is suitable for human's living, which could motivate people's willpower and make tourists braver. Meanwhile, the magnificent landscape of those places benefits visitors to understand the world deeply and broaden their horizon. For example, Wang Shi, a successful businessman in China and keen on adventure, often express that the success of his business is from the experience of his adventure in the Antarctic and many famous snow mountains.
However, such travel also could set tourists in dangerous. The extreme weather and other factors may make people injured and even be harmful to their lives. If travellers’ any gear has any problem, it will be desperately dangerous for them, especially for a single tourist. For instance, two Beijing University's students died in the Mount Everest due to the blasting snow and the broken of their communication equipment ten years ago.
In conclusion, traveling areas where conditions are difficult contribute people to experience an impressive journey, but it also may bring unsafe for people. It is suitable for people who are willing to try some different experiences and not fear the uncertain risks.
An increasing number of
people
would like to visit areas of extreme condition, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antarctic or the Mountain Everest. This could
leave
the impressive
experiences
in a person's life,
but
it
also
exists
some
risks
during the journey.
Visiting places of difficult conditions can give
people
a unique
experience
. This is
because
extreme conditional areas are not the places
that is
suitable for human's living, which could motivate
people
's willpower and
make
tourists braver. Meanwhile, the magnificent landscape of those places benefits visitors to understand the world
deeply
and broaden their horizon.
For example
, Wang Shi, a successful businessman in China and keen on adventure,
often
express that the success of his business is from the
experience
of his adventure in the Antarctic and
many
famous
snow mountains.
However
, such travel
also
could set tourists in
dangerous
. The extreme weather and other factors may
make
people
injured and even be harmful to their
lives
. If
travellers
’ any gear has any problem, it will be
desperately
dangerous
for them,
especially
for a single tourist.
For instance
, two Beijing University's students
died
in the Mount Everest due to the blasting snow and
the broken of
their communication equipment ten years ago.
In conclusion
, traveling areas where conditions are difficult contribute
people
to
experience
an impressive journey,
but
it
also
may bring unsafe for
people
. It is suitable for
people
who are willing to try
some
different
experiences
and not fear the uncertain
risks
.
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