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TODAY, MANY PEOPLE DO NOT KNOW THEIR NEIGHBOUR IN LARGE CITIES. WHAT PROBLEM DOES THIS CAUSE? WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT THIS?

TODAY, MANY PEOPLE DO NOT KNOW THEIR NEIGHBOUR IN LARGE CITIES. WHAT PROBLEM DOES THIS CAUSE? WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT THIS? Q2eqx

Although it is ideal to reside in large metropolis, most people are not aware who their neighbours are. This essay will examine and discuss the some of the causes connected to this and provide possible solution on this problem. 39 The two main problem that could arise from this are theft and depression. The luxurious neighbourhood attracts robbers and since the people residing next door are not familiar with whoever the owner of the house, they would not suspect anything. This furthermore leave a negative effect on the victim as they would experience emotional breakdown contemplating on what had happened and no one went to rescue them. To illustrate, the people in the city are more stressed than those living in the countryside. If people would be sensitive to their surroundings, they could have provided support to the needy. 99 Some of the possible solutions to this problem are by participating in community works and townhall meeting. The local government should organize and encourage its citizens to take part in social activity such as bookfair and volunteers to clean the area. With this individual would have the chance to socialize whilst volunteering in some charity works. This would also motivate them in attending and raising their concerns in the weekly or monthly gathering in their town. For instance, by taking part in clean drive organized, they are given the chance to build their circles in their community. 97 To sum up, even though it would be convenient to live in the city, crime and anxiety could arise. However, this could be resolved if people would participate in charity works and local gatherings to socialize with their neighbour. 39

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people
 are not aware who their Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
 are. This essay will examine and discuss the If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 causes connected to this and provide possible solution on this problem. 39

The two main problem that could arise from this are theft and depression. The luxurious Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
 attracts robbers and since the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 residing next
 door are not familiar with whoever the owner of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, they would not suspect anything. This furthermore
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leave
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 effect on the victim as they would experience emotional breakdown contemplating on what had happened and no one went to rescue them. To illustrate, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 in the city are more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuated
stressed
 than those living in the countryside. If You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 would be sensitive to their surroundings, they could have provided support to the needy. 99

If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?Some
Some of the
 possible solutions to this problem are by participating in community works and Possible spelling mistake found.town hall
townhall
 meeting. The local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should organize and encourage its citizens to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :participate
take part
 in social activity such as Possible spelling mistake found.book fair
bookfair
 and volunteers to clean the area. With this individual would have the chance to socialize whilst volunteering in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 charity works. This would also
 motivate them in attending and raising their concerns in the weekly or monthly gathering in their town. For instance
, by taking part in clean drive organized, they are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 the chance to build their circles in their community. 97

To sum up, even though
 it would be convenient to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the city, crime and anxiety could arise. However
, this could be resolved
 if You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 would participate in charity works and local gatherings to socialize with their Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
. 39