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PEOPLE ARE ANNOYED OR ENTERTAINED BY ADVERTISING BUT THEY ARE AFFECTED BY ADVERTISEMENT WHEN MAKING SHOPPING DECISIONS. TO WHAT EXTEND TO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

PEOPLE ARE ANNOYED OR ENTERTAINED BY ADVERTISING BUT THEY ARE AFFECTED BY ADVERTISEMENT WHEN MAKING SHOPPING DECISIONS. 66JQx

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