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Today many people as not know their neighbour in large cities what problem does this case what can be done about this

Today many people as not know their neighbour in large cities what problem does this case what can be done about this pbWp3

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see
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neighbour
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because
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lives
. If individuals should work-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
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familes
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people
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so
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stress
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commited
Possible spelling mistake found.suicide
succide
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make
 free hours to socialize with each other. Firstly
, authorities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 traditional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 nations celebrates. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 could plan a ceremony to celebrate than these special This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
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intance
, either they could gather in one s home or the building has a garden Did you mean "they", "that" or "there"?theythatthere
the
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meet
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each
 other there. Secondly
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government
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must
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conselling
 to individual about co-operation in their Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbour' is British English.neighbor
neighbour
 as far as they can do well-fare working for needy humanity. To conclude
, it can be recapitulated
 that although Did you mean "they're becoming", "they are becoming", or "they were becoming"?they're becomingthey are becomingthey were becoming
they becoming
 unsocial and the isolation will increase at an alarming rate which has serious health issue, yet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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organise
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 together parties in their Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
. 