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India's transport system and difficulties to people in regular ways.

India's transport system and difficulties to people in regular ways. OEAxy

As it is well known that INDIA is still developing in many sectors and the roads are one of them. the roads of India's many cities are not well worthy and it is very hard for folks to commute to their works normally, however, the authority has made many exemptions to tackle this issue but as far as the roads are being used by citizens it is quite hard for them to repair it as it affects the daily life.

As it is well known that INDIA is still
 developing in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 sectors and the roads are one of them. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 roads of India's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 cities are not well worthy and it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for folks to commute to their works normally
, however
, the authority has made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 exemptions to tackle this issue This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as far as the roads are being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by citizens it is quite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for them to repair it as it affects the daily life. 

IELTS essay India's transport system and difficulties to people in regular ways.

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American English

1 paragraphs

80 words

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