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Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development?

Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development? kKqR
In this day and age, food is imported from various countries globally for people all around the world to eat everyday. In my opinion, while some drawbacks can be seen from this, the benefits, including multi choices and having a balanced diet are more significant. Admittedly, sometimes food that comes from unknown resources can create harmful effects on people’s health. For instance, the qualified food is produced in the factory which is delivered to other countries by transportation. This could lead to the fact that the original food can be switched by disqualified and unhealthy food in the delivery way as there are some customers who did not really have the right purposes. On the other hand, the various types of food coming from different parts of the world can make the choices of each person in each meal more diverse. Not only a balanced diet can help people to achieve and maintain good health, but also help them to experience good physical and mental health. To be more specific, different specialties from different countries can make people who put attention on having a good grasp of the food field develop their knowledge of globalization. Moreover, eating a diversity of food everyday but having healthy eating patterns that contain less fat and sugars can curb the obesity epidemic. In conclusion, although the disadvantages seem justifiable to a certain extent, I agree that importing food from different parts of the world has more benefits.
In this day and age,
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from various countries globally for
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all around the world to eat
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. In my opinion, while
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from this, the benefits, including multi choices and having a balanced diet are more significant.

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sometimes
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food
that
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comes
from unknown resources can create harmful effects on
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people’s
health.
For instance
, the qualified
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food
is produced
in the factory which
is delivered
to other countries by transportation. This could lead to the fact that the original
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food
can
be switched
by disqualified and unhealthy
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food
in the delivery way as there are
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some
customers who did not
really
have the right purposes.

On the other hand
, the various types of
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food
coming from
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different
parts of the world can
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make
the choices of each person in each meal more diverse. Not
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only
a balanced diet can
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help
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people
to achieve and maintain
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health,
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also
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physical and mental health. To be more specific,
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different
specialties from
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different
countries can
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make
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people
who put attention on having a
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good
grasp of the
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food
field develop their knowledge of globalization.
Moreover
, eating a diversity of
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food
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everyday
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but
having healthy eating patterns that contain less
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fat
and sugars can curb the obesity epidemic.

In conclusion
, although the disadvantages seem justifiable to a certain extent, I
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agree
that importing
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food
from
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different
parts of the world has more benefits.
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IELTS essay Today many countries import food from different parts of the world. Is this a positive or negative development?

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  American English
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243 words
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