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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people lives.others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people lives. others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion dy72

Good evening to all. Today we will discuss about human being happiness. Now a days everyone busy in the world, such a time all are required some relief to overcome the stress. so everyone planned to plan some vocational trip once a month or twice. doctors also advised to make some fun enjoyment things with our family and friends circle. spending the time for the activities like boating, swimming and shopping, etc. Another important way for human happiness as taking deep sleep. At present most of the people's addicted in mobilephone, we must to avoid to use the mobile phone in loger time, Even small child also fully engaged in tab and mobile devices. It will mainly affected the eye and leads to major problems in his life.

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discuss about human
 being happiness. Did you mean "nowadays"?Nowadays
Now a days
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important
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must to
 avoid to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
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 the mobile phone in Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "logger", the comparative form of the adjective 'log'?loggerlongerlowerRogerloverloser
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 time, Even This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
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 engaged in tab and mobile devices. It will mainly
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 the eye and leads to major problems in his life. 