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Today, many cities around the world face an increasing amount of garbage produced by citizens. What kind of solution would be addressed to tackle that problem!

Today, many cities around the world face an increasing amount of garbage produced by citizens. What kind of solution would be addressed to tackle that problem! g5e1A
Today, many cities around the world face an increasing amount of garbage produced by citizens. I think the main reasons for this are consumerism and overpackaged goods, and it certainly needs to be dealt with. (35 words) One reason why the amount of rubbish produced is rising is the consumerist lifestyle of many people today which has led them to buy and consume more products such as food, clothes and home appliances. As a result, they often have to throw away their old belongings to make room for the new ones. Furthermore, most products today have packages and boxes that need to be thrown away. For instance, most dishes are wrapped in nylon covers, bubble wraps and cardboard boxes, which together can fill a large rubbish bag. (90 words) To decrease the amount of garbage, governments can legislate laws to limit the garbage produced by households to a certain level, say, a kilogram every day. As a result, people would definitely try to buy only the things they need to avoid throwing away too much. Another possible solution would be to encourage producers to improve their packaging techniques and use less packaging material like paper and plastic. For instance, if governments ask dish producers to use printed and colourful bubble wraps, they can act as protective covers as well as eye-catching packages, which means that buyers will only have to throw away one wrapper. (105 words) In conclusion, the reasons behind the rise in waste production include consumerism and product packages, and possible solutions are laws to restrict household garbage as well as encouraging industries to use improved packaging. (33 words)
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the main reasons for this are consumerism and
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overpackaged
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people
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which has led them to
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buy
and consume more products such as food, clothes and home appliances.
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, they
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often
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have to
throw
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their
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old
belongings to
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make
room for the new ones.
Furthermore
, most products
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today
have packages and boxes that need to
be thrown
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away
.
For instance
, most dishes
are wrapped
in nylon covers, bubble wraps and cardboard boxes, which together can fill a large rubbish bag. (90 words)

To decrease the amount of garbage,
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governments
can legislate laws to limit the garbage produced by households to a certain level, say, a kilogram every day.
As a result
,
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people
would definitely try to
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buy
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only
the things they need to avoid throwing
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away
too much. Another possible solution would be to encourage producers to
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improve
their packaging techniques and
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use
less packaging material like paper and plastic.
For instance
, if
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governments
ask dish producers to
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use
printed and
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colourful
bubble wraps, they can act as protective covers
as well
as eye-catching packages, which means that buyers will
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only
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have to
throw
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away
one wrapper. (105 words)

In conclusion
, the reasons behind the rise in waste production include consumerism and product packages, and possible solutions are laws to restrict household garbage
as well
as encouraging industries to
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use
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
packaging. (33 words)

IELTS essay Today, many cities around the world face an increasing amount of garbage produced by citizens. What kind of solution would be addressed to tackle that problem!

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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