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should teenagers concentrate on all subjects or on the study they are best at

should teenagers concentrate on all subjects or on the study they are best at r80XN

some people think that young person should focus on all subjects whereas, others say that they should be given the choice of studying subjects of their interest. i will discuss both viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs. i personally believe that focusing on all school subjects are beneficial for the youth. on the one hand, there are various reasons why some people hold the opinion that students should to choose their own subjects which is the most interesting. firstly, the students will more keen interest in their study and will have more motivation to learn and come to school. secondly, it reduces stress among the students because they have fewer subjects to learn and also they can find time to relax with some other activities like dance and sports.

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