Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Today, majority people establishing to erect communal in a massive spaces of public.( the purpose of create new city or town)

Today, majority people establishing to erect communal in a massive spaces of public. ( the purpose of create new city or town) Y2V8V
Today, majority people establishing to erect communal in a massive spaces of public. ( the purpose of create new city or town) I am in agreement with this view point. Lets trigger debate on this essay. To commence with, now, some of huge public places located in region or district namely undeveloped places. If new erect communal built to this places then to find the solve to problem a lot such as gas, fresh water and others for instance, a villige which near my villige, two years ago, it was a poor village but today, it is a modern village namely apartment block builting to lesuired place. In shortly tell that people of a poor town improve their social well-fare. On the other hand, in addition to above statement that if investor spend a huge amount of money for cities and towns. Goverment or investor Said to developer built hospital, school and enducationl center as a result people provide with work, this result that a reason one a big problem which population increasing day by day so, some of people living in street therefore, the errct communal must built to public spaces. In conclusion, I consider that the building block built to public places becouse of homeless and population rising everywhere and everyday.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Today
, majority
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
establishing to erect communal in a massive
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "space"?
spaces
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
.
Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
(
the purpose of create new city or town) I am in agreement with this view point.
Did you mean "Let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?
Lets
trigger debate on this essay. To commence with,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of huge
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
located in region or district
namely
undeveloped
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
. If new erect communal built to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
then to find
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'solve' is correct. If 'solve' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the solve
to problem a lot such as gas, fresh water
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
and others
for instance
, a
Possible spelling mistake found.
villige
which near my
Possible spelling mistake found.
villige
, two years ago, it was a poor village
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, it is a modern village
namely
apartment block
Possible spelling mistake found.
builting
to
Possible spelling mistake found.
lesuired
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
. In shortly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
of a poor town
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
their social well-fare.
On the other hand
,
in addition
to above statement that if investor spend a huge amount of money for cities and towns.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Goverment
or investor Said to developer built hospital, school and
Possible spelling mistake found.
enducationl
center
as a result
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
provide with work, this result that a reason one a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
problem which population increasing day by day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
living in street
therefore
, the
Possible spelling mistake found.
errct
communal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
built to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
spaces.
In conclusion
, I consider that the building block built to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
Possible spelling mistake found.
becouse
of homeless and population rising everywhere and
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
everyday
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Today, majority people establishing to erect communal in a massive spaces of public. ( the purpose of create new city or town)

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
213 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Today, majority people establishing to erect communal in a massive spaces of public.( the purpose of create new city or town)