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The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of crazy ielts in 2019and in 2020

The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of crazy ielts in 2019and in 2020 LlgR6
The two plans give information about the small and signaficant changes of the layout of the ground floor of Crazy IELTS between 2019 and 2020. On the one hand, in 2019 the study area was the largest space of Crazy IELTS and in 2020. It was devided into two rooms which were CHildren's area and Massive practice area. The next room was speakers room and the walls were destroyed in 2020. On the other hand, the area of Publishing house was small because of the Hugo's statue in 2019 and in 2020 the cafe was added to the Publishing house because the Hugo's statue was moved in central part of the ground. Moreover, the reception was in the Hugo's office in 2019 and in 2020 it was moved near to the entrance. Overall, general layout of the ground floor of Crazy IELTS was not a big alteration wherease the entrance and stairs remain their place without change in two years.
The two plans give information about the
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small
and
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signaficant
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changes
of the layout of the
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ground floor
of Crazy IELTS between 2019 and 2020.

On the one hand, in 2019 the study
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area
was the largest space of Crazy IELTS and in 2020. It was
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devided
into two rooms which were
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CHildren
's
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area
and Massive practice
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area
. The
next
room was speakers room and the walls were
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destroyed
in 2020.

On the other hand
, the
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area
of Publishing
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house
was
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small
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because
of the Hugo's statue in 2019 and in 2020 the
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cafe
was
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added
to the Publishing
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house
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because
the Hugo's statue was
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moved
in central part of the ground.
Moreover
, the reception was in the Hugo's office in 2019 and in 2020 it was
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moved
near to the entrance.

Overall
, general layout of the
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ground floor
of Crazy IELTS was not a
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big
alteration
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wherease
the entrance and stairs remain their place without
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change
in two years.

IELTS essay The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of crazy ielts in 2019and in 2020

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160 words
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