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Vietnam is a country with a diverse ethnic identity because there are more than 54 ethnic groups with many different traditions. But in harmony with the atmosphere to celebrate Tet across the country, people gather together on New Year's Eve to pack banh chung, banh tet, indispensable things on Tet holiday. In the past, the wrapping of banh chung to a sign respect to heaven, earth and nature rely on the story "". The cake is wrapped with "dong" leaves or banana leaves with green beans, pork and sticky rice inside. Everyone wrapped the cake together, the younger learned experiences and secrets from the forerunners to preserve and preserve the customs. perhaps it is a long tradition and is being innovated by everyone. Cakes also become diverse with many colors to suit everyone's taste
Vietnam is a country with a diverse ethnic identity
because
there are more than 54 ethnic groups with
many
different
traditions.
But
in harmony with the atmosphere to celebrate Tet across the country,
people
gather together on New Year's Eve to pack
banh
chung
,
banh
tet
, indispensable things on Tet holiday. In the past, the wrapping of
banh
chung
to a
sign
respect to heaven, earth and nature rely on the story
"
". The cake
is wrapped
with
"
dong
"
leaves
or banana
leaves
with green beans, pork and sticky rice inside. Everyone wrapped the cake together, the younger learned experiences and secrets from the forerunners to preserve and preserve the customs.
perhaps
it is a long tradition and is
being innovated
by everyone. Cakes
also
become diverse with
many
colors to suit everyone's
taste
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IELTS essay describle exciting traditiona

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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