Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Today I'm going to talk about my special meal

Today I'm going to talk about my special meal 5Bbbm
Today I'm going to talk about my special meal Really for me, the days when the whole family reunites is a special day, especially on Tet days when the whole family gathers together. Usually my mother and grandmother will go to the market to buy necessary ingredients. to cook a hearty meal for all family members. then we spend most of our time cooking delicious food together, the food we cook may not be as delicious as a restaurant, but it has the flavor of intimacy and increases the cohesion of the members in the family in every reunion and that's also why I say this meal is a special one That's all I want to say.
Today
I'm going to talk about my special meal

Really
for me, the days when the whole
family
reunites is a special day,
especially
on Tet days when the whole
family
gathers together.
Usually
my mother and grandmother will go to the market to
buy
necessary ingredients.
to
cook a hearty meal for all
family
members.
then
we spend most of our time cooking delicious food together, the food we cook may not be as delicious as a restaurant,
but
it has the flavor of intimacy and increases the cohesion of the members in the
family
in every reunion and that's
also
why I say this meal is a special one

That's all I want to say.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Today I'm going to talk about my special meal

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
117 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5band
    The problem you have experienced at school
    A few month ago, when i was in grade 9, i did not have many good memories. Because my class had no solidarity, we were in a factional situation. In that time, there were many group talking behind their back. Body shaming, bad joke, hoax on each other were always happened. During the break, they sit...
  • 6.5band
    Under certain situations, people who break the law should get warning instead of receiving punishment.
    Nowadays, people have different opinions on punishing offenders. Some people believe that everyone who violates the rules must be punished, while others oppose this view. Obviously, this view is one-sided. There is a line between those who should be punished and those who should not. First of all, ...
  • 5band
    The given pictures illustrate the alterations that have occurred in the art gallery since 2015
    The given pictures illustrate the alterations that have occurred in the art gallery since 2015. As is reveal from the pictures, overall, it is obvious that the most significant variations have taken place in the west, whereas there have been little of transformations in the middle and east over the...
  • 5band
    Today I will talk about a special meal that my brother cook for me
    Today I will talk about a special meal that my brother cook for me If my memory serves me right, that's about 3 many years ago. At that time, I had undergone surgery so my health was very weak, the only thing I could eat when it was 'porridge' I want to share more about that meal. I was with my br...
  • 5band
    pictures on TV and newspapers more effective
    It would be wrong to say that tourism has not received a lot of attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society. Some people take the view that pictures on TV and newspapers more effective than words. On the other hand there are others who believe vice versa. These p...
  • 5band
    Discuss about advantages and disadvantages about homework
    In the morden life, every single family want their children succeed in studying. Some people think that homework is necessary for students but others claim that it isn’t important. This essay is written about the advantages and disadvantages about homework. In my opinion, homework has more advantage...