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It would be wrong to say that tourism has not received a lot of attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society. Some people take the view that pictures on TV and newspapers more effective than words. On the other hand there are others who believe vice versa. These points will be explained in the following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion. It would be wrong to say that tourism has not received a lot of attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society. Some people take the view that pictures on TV and newspapers more effective than words. On the other hand there are others who believe vice versa. These points will be explained in the following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion.
It would be
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wrong
to say that tourism has not received
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a lot of
attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society.

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Some
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people
take the view that pictures on TV and newspapers more effective than words. On the
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other
hand there are others who believe vice versa. These points will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
in the following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion.

It would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
to say that tourism has not received
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
take the view that pictures on TV and newspapers more effective than words. On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand there are others who believe vice versa.

These points will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explained
in the following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion.
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IELTS essay pictures on TV and newspapers more effective

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
138 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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