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The problem you have experienced at school

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A few month ago, when i was in grade 9, i did not have many good memories. Because my class had no solidarity, we were in a factional situation. In that time, there were many group talking behind their back. Body shaming, bad joke, hoax on each other were always happened. During the break, they sit in group and talking but they often talk about some person in the other group. They made fun of someone even that is irrelevant. And the bad thing ever is a boy speaks ill of a girl, they do all kinds of weird things to taunt girl if the girl did some thing wrong. For the last three weeks of the second semester, the teacher had talked a lot about this. But our teachers can't do anything still the end of the second semester.
A few month ago, when
i
was in grade 9,
i
did not have
many
good
memories.
Because
my
class
had no solidarity, we were in a factional situation. In that time, there were
many
group talking behind their back. Body shaming,
bad
joke, hoax on each other were always happened.

During the break, they sit in group and talking
but
they
often
talk about
some
person in the other group. They made fun of someone even
that is
irrelevant. And the
bad
thing ever is a boy speaks ill of a girl, they do all kinds of weird things to taunt girl if the girl did
some thing
wrong
.

For the last three weeks of the second semester, the teacher had talked a lot about this.
But
our teachers can't do anything
still
the
end
of the second semester.
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IELTS essay The problem you have experienced at school

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
140 words
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5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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