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Today I'm going to talk about my memorable travel

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Today I'm going to talk about my memorable travel If I remember correctly, this trip took place at the end of 2019 when I was in my first year of high school. My school organizes this tour with the aim of helping students have creative experiences, so I went to SunWorld Ha Long. This can be said to be a very special and memorable trip because it was my first time traveling with so many unknown people, and I thought that this trip would be extremely boring because I didn't know anyone in the new class. But no, the classmates were very friendly and we had a lot of fun together. so I consider this is a pretty memorable trip
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IELTS essay Today I'm going to talk about my memorable travel

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
119 words
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