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*Stages involved in making paper*

*Stages involved in making paper* eEKRA
The image show that the way in which paper is produced from timber plant, it pass through 7-9stages to produce paper. In the first stage of making paper, wood of timber tree are cropped and collected from the forest by workers Later the collected timber wood would be unloaded into De-barking chamber, then from here it moves Into chipping machine in which the wood was chipped into small pieces after chipping the small pieces of wood was transferred into pulping process, where the tiny piece of wood crushed into small grains the pulping process consists of three stages, firstly mechanical pulping process and then transfers into chemical pulping process and later it was shifted into hydrapulper. after hydra pulper process done it transports into screening and cleaning where the wood grains are tested and purified. and finally it takes to paper making machine it was the final stage in which paper was produced.
The image
show
that the way in which paper
is produced
from timber plant, it
pass
through
7-9stages
to produce paper.

In the
first
stage
of making paper,
wood
of timber tree
are cropped
and collected from the forest by workers

Later the collected timber
wood
would
be unloaded
into
De-barking
chamber, then from here it
moves
Into chipping machine in which the
wood
was chipped
into
small
pieces after chipping the
small
pieces of
wood
was transferred
into pulping
process
, where the tiny piece of
wood
crushed into
small
grains the pulping
process
consists of three
stages
,
firstly
mechanical pulping
process
and then transfers into chemical pulping
process
and later it
was shifted
into
hydrapulper
.
after
hydra
pulper
process
done it transports into screening and cleaning where the
wood
grains are
tested
and purified.
and
finally
it takes to paper making machine it was the final
stage
in which paper
was produced
.
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IELTS essay *Stages involved in making paper*

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