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Today I talk about you my bicycle tour.

Today I talk about you my bicycle tour. G368j
Yesterday, on a cool afternoon. I and they decided to go on a bicycle tour that I went to school before coming to DN. We went around where we lived. We did everything to make our bicycle tour fun and memorable like taking pictures together, organizing a bicycle race and helping people around. After, we rest but still do not forget to play games to make the atmosphere more fun. When I look up at the sky, I feel so comfortable, fresh and soothing, unlike the busy and polluted city air. And we don't forget to enjoy some delicious food along the way. Do you know what happened next to us? It was a sudden rain that came upon us. Because we didn't bring raincoats and got wet when we got home. I always enjoy every minute of my bicycle tour because I feel like it's useful. It not only helps me improve my health, reduce stress, but also helps me feel the slow rhythm of life in the countryside but very peaceful and quiet. Finally, being able to enjoy the beautiful nature of the countryside on this bicycle tour is indeed refreshing for our young souls.
Yesterday, on a cool afternoon. I and they decided to go on a
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that I went to school
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coming to DN. We went around where we
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. We did everything to
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our
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bicycle
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fun and memorable like taking pictures together, organizing a
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race and helping
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people
around. After, we rest
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but
still
do not forget to play games to
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make
the atmosphere more fun. When I look up at the sky, I feel
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so
comfortable, fresh and soothing, unlike the busy and polluted city air. And we don't forget to enjoy
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some
delicious food along the way. Do you know what happened
next
to us? It was a sudden rain that came upon us.
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we didn't bring raincoats and
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got
wet when we
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home.

I always enjoy every minute of my
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tour
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because
I feel like it's useful. It not
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me
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my health,
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also
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helps
me feel the slow rhythm of life in the countryside
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peaceful and quiet.
Finally
, being able to enjoy the
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beautiful
nature of the countryside on this
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is
indeed
refreshing for our young souls.
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IELTS essay Today I talk about you my bicycle tour.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
197 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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