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Today , I have seen a person so kind. He has helped me order drink juice when I was in the restaurant. So surpried , I feel excited and comfortable with activities of him. So I fell in love with him. My post end here. Thank you for reading.

Today, I have seen a person so kind. He has helped me order drink juice when I was in the restaurant. So surpried, I feel excited and comfortable with activities of him. So I fell in love with him. My post end here. Thank you for reading. yxbpV
Today, I have seen a person so kind. He has helped me order drink juice when I was in the restaurant. So surpried, I feel excited and comfortable with activities of him. So I fell in love with him. My post end here. Thank you for reading. There was 5 things which I did in a day. The first, in the morning, I went out with my friends. We went to the restaurant and ordered chicken to eat. Afterthat, We played badminton in the park near. The meeting ends, I went to home by bus. I helped my mom make dinner and did the washing up. Afterthat, I did do my homework, listened English, speaked English with myself. I surfed Facebook, Tiktok. Before 11pm, I seted up the larm to next day ajd switched off the light. Yeah, that's my activities in a day.
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There was 5 things
which I did in a day. The
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, in the morning, I went out with my friends. We went to the restaurant and ordered chicken to eat.
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Afterthat
, We played badminton in the park near. The meeting ends, I
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went to home
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helped
my mom
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make
dinner and did the washing up.
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Afterthat
, I did do my homework, listened English,
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English with myself. I surfed Facebook,
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Tiktok
.
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11pm, I
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IELTS essay Today, I have seen a person so kind. He has helped me order drink juice when I was in the restaurant. So surpried, I feel excited and comfortable with activities of him. So I fell in love with him. My post end here. Thank you for reading.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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