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Today, computers can translate all languages. Some people believe that there is no need for children to learn more languages in future. Do you agree or disagree?

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It goes beyond doubt that computers have ushered in a sea-change in every arena of life. Nowadays, sophistication in computer technology has made it possible to translate a text from one language into another one. That’s why some people view that children need not learn more languages in future. But my views are not in synchronization with this school of thought. To initiate, although computers can handle many languages yet when it comes to precision, human are for better. As a matter of fact, every language has many nuances which cannot be interpreted by computers. Moreover, there are ma. . .
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IELTS essay Today, computers can translate all languages. Some people believe that there is no need for children to learn more languages in future.

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