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To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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In modern era communication has become an essential part of everyday life. It has been suggested that state need to expand more bugget on railway than roads. I strongly agree with this idea and i will give some arguments to support my opinion. Generally speaking there are a wide range of people believe that government should invest more money in railway than road. The primary argument supporting this idea is that we will get environmental benifit. If Government develop railway system people will dis motivated to buy privet cars. As a result we can save our fuel as well as environment will keep clean. Another key argument in support of this idea is that rail can transport more people than bus or privet cars. For this traffic jam will reduce during rush hours. For example, a matro rail can transport over 2000 people each trip on the other hand a city bus can transport not more than 30 people. Despite of these arguments, there is also a case for the idea that is rail is cheaper than road transport. As a result we can save our money from daily expense of communication. A good illustration of this is that Bangladesh recently introduce metrorail where people spend 1. 00 taka for each km but 2. 50/km should pay for city bus in Dhaka. In conclusion, If the authority implement this policy it will provide batter life for future generation.
In modern era communication has become an essential part of everyday life. It has
been suggested
that state need to expand more
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bugget
on railway than roads. I
strongly
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agree
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idea
and
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i
will give
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some
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arguments
to support my opinion.

Generally
speaking there are a wide range of
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people
believe that
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government
should invest more money in railway than road. The primary
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argument
supporting this
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idea
is that we will
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get
environmental
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benifit
.
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If
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Government
develop railway system
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people
will
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dis
motivated to
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buy
privet cars.
As a result
we can save our fuel
as well
as environment will
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keep
clean. Another key
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argument
in support of this
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idea
is that rail can
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transport
more
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people
than bus or privet cars. For this traffic jam will
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reduce
during rush hours.
For example
, a
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matro
rail can
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transport
over 2000
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people
each trip
on the other hand
a city bus can
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transport
not more than 30
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people
.

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Despite of
these
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arguments
, there is
also
a case for the
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idea
that is
rail is cheaper than road
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transport
.
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As
a result we can save our money from daily expense of communication. A
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good
illustration of this is that Bangladesh recently introduce
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metrorail
where
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people
spend 1. 00
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taka
for each km
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2. 50/km should pay for city bus in Dhaka.

In conclusion
, If the authority implement this policy it will provide batter life for future generation.

IELTS essay To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
238 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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