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Some people argue that if more women were put in charge, there would be less war. But these assumptions have no support. However, I believe that both women and men can be wise and peaceful ruler regardless of gender. To sum up, both men and women have strengths and weaknesses biologically. I think these stereotypes no more relevant and thinking that putting more women in power would prevent society from war is misconception and leader should be chosen not by gender but based on intellectual and personal skills.

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