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easter island civilization collapse

easter island civilization collapse aA119

The article introduces the topic of Easter Island. More specifically, the writer discusses the reasons of Easter Island civilization declined. The lecturer in the listening passage disagrees. He believes that the reasons are not the cause of the declined and attacks each of the claims made In reading. In the reading, the author begins by stating that the rats that were brought by boats to the island destroyed all food resources. The lecturer, however, disagrees. He states that there are enough food and the island people usually depend on sea food such as fish and not just gardening. He goes on to say that even if rats destroyed some source of food that did not affect on island collapse. The author also claims that population of the Island decreases because battels among the and they use blades as a weapon. Again lecturer believes there are flaws in the writers argument. The speaker holds that the blades did not used as a weapon at all and it just was a tool to cut rocks. Another reason why the author feels that destroyed Easter Island is that the diseases were brought by outsider From Europe and South America that cause death for a numerous of people. The professor in the listening passage is doubtful that this is accurate. He suggests that diseases can not be brought from visitors and it was exist before any contact with outsiders. To sum up, both the writer and professor hold conflicting views about Easter Island collapse. Its clear that they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue.

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Island
. More specifically
, the writer discusses the reasons of Easter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
Island
 civilization declined. The lecturer in the listening passage disagrees. He believes that the reasons are not the cause of the declined and attacks each of the claims made In reading.

In the reading, the author This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
 by stating that the rats that were brought
 by boats to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 resources. The lecturer, however
, disagrees. He states that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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food
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
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people
usually
 depend on sea You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 such as fish and not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 gardening. He goes on to say that even if rats This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
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some
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food
 that did not Did you mean "effect"?effect
affect
 on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
island
 collapse.

The author also
 claims that population of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
Island
 decreases This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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battels
 among Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).the, and
the and
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use
 blades as a weapon. Again lecturer believes there are flaws in the Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "writers'" or "writer's"?writers'writer's
writers
 argument. The speaker holds that the blades did not The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: "use"use
used
 as a weapon at all and it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 was a tool to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 rocks.

Another reason why the author feels that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 Easter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
Island
 is that the diseases were brought
 by outsider From Europe and South America that cause death for The phrase 'a numerous of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'a' and 'of'.
a numerous of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. The professor in the listening passage is doubtful that this is accurate. He suggests that diseases can not be brought
 from visitors and it was Consider using a past participle here: "existed".existed
exist
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 any contact with outsiders.

To sum up, both the writer and professor hold conflicting views about Easter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpeninsulareefarchipelagoenclaveisletisle
Island
 collapse. Its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that they will have trouble finding common ground on this issue. 