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student council in a coeducational

student council in a coeducational D2QPa
In a coeducational, there were tidy and sensitive adolescents which were candidated for student council And each of them had made promises to their friends And each person used their own utensil for advertising One of the ads was the free injection of the corona vaccine Others were spontaneous and radical people To collect more votes, they bought cooling devices and installed them to keep the air of the classrooms temperte In the end, a skim student whose votes were preceded the others won.
In a coeducational, there were tidy and sensitive adolescents which were
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candidated
for student council And each of them had made promises to their friends And each person
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used
their
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own
utensil for advertising One of the ads was the free injection of the corona vaccine Others were spontaneous and radical
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people
To collect more votes, they
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bought
cooling devices and installed them to
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keep
the air of the classrooms
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temperte
In the
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end
, a skim student whose votes
were preceded
the others won.
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IELTS essay student council in a coeducational

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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