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‘Teenagers are too young to teach other people about anything.’ Do you agree?

‘Teenagers are too young to teach other people about anything. ’ Do you agree? 3YJ6w
Adults often think teenagers to be noisy, childish and violent. Some of them even don’t think they have any adult senses or wise thoughts at all but, as a teenager, I think we’re intelligent enough to teach other people some things, and, according to this, I’m not agree with the quotation on top of the page. For example, lots of teenagers have better knowledge in technology, so they can teach the older generation how to deal with gadgets. In our gymnasium there are special classes for the senior people where they are taught to work on computers, and their teachers are teenagers. Moreover, teenagers have the great knowledge in ecology, and they are really concerned on saving the planet alive. We talk a lot about environment on classes, we take part in ecology olympiades and contests for the best ecological projects and often won them, so we have a lot to tell the others about environmental problems and ways of their solving. Besides this, teenagers can teach adults foreign languages. According to the statistics, 50% of adult generation of our country don’t know any foreign languages, so we can help them to come by the new knowledge or to improve that what they have. And, of course, students from foreign countries can teach Russian students their language, and Russians can teach them Russian. It is sometimes done in linguistic centres. To sum up I can say that teenagers have great knowledge in many fields of study, so they can also teach the people of older generation and their classmates and friends.
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any adult senses or wise thoughts at all
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, I
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other

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people
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things, and, according to this, I’m not
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with the quotation on top of the page.

For example
, lots of
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teenagers
have better knowledge in technology,
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so
they can
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teach
the older

generation how to deal with gadgets. In our gymnasium there are special classes for the senior
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people


where they
are taught
to work on computers, and their teachers are
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teenagers
.

Moreover
,
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teenagers
have the great knowledge in ecology, and they are
really
concerned on saving the

planet alive. We talk a lot about environment on classes, we
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take part
in ecology
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olympiades
and

contests for the best ecological projects and
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won them,
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we have a lot to
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tell
the others about

environmental problems and ways of their solving.

Besides
this,
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teenagers
can
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teach
adults foreign languages. According to the statistics, 50% of adult

generation of our country don’t know any foreign languages,
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so
we can
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them to
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knowledge or to
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that what they have. And,
of course
, students from foreign countries can teach

Russian students their language, and Russians can
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teach
them Russian. It is
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sometimes
done in

linguistic
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centres
.

To sum up I can say that
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teenagers
have great knowledge in
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many
fields of study,
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they can
also
teach

the
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people
of older generation and their classmates and friends.
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IELTS essay ‘Teenagers are too young to teach other people about anything. ’ Do you agree?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
261 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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