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My topic a is day by day increase diseases.

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Diseases is increasing day by day. This is situation very big. People of death with people. This situation will not stop one day very fast increas. Such a cancer, fat this Diseases is very big. Cancer is very big diseases. Cancer affects State on body. Cancer increas also day by day. Fat also very big reasonis of diseases. People are using daily fast food day by day. People are not stopping the junk food. Junk food is daily waste oil in use this is not good my for body.
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Diseases
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increasing day by day. This is situation
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people
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increas
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cancer
,
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fat
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Diseases
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Cancer
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diseases
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affects State on body.
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Cancer
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increas
also
day by day.
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Fat
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diseases
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People
are using daily
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food day by day.
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People
are not stopping the junk food. Junk food is daily waste oil in
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this is not
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IELTS essay My topic a is day by day increase diseases.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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