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To succeed in the business, one needs to know maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

To succeed in the business, one needs to know maths. JnQD
It is refutable that, every citizen sucessful in their life. Few people say that, to achieve success in business maths play's an essential role. I largely agree with this statement. My justification is classified in upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, maths is very important nowadays. By using maths is very important to solve the complex questions or large number of sums. In business, maths is very important part for loses and profit. Maths is used in everywhere like CA, Bank and many more. Many problems can be solve by the maths. Although, numerous multinational companies are making large amount of product, by using mats to estimate how much product is in demand and how many will be sold and benefit the company. In addition, You can achieve your goal if you know the math. For example, the great mathematics Arya Bhatt was very famous in the world. He know about the maths than he is achieved the success. He is invented of the zero digit. So, he became a very famous. People can easily understand in mathematics. To contrast, maths is not essential to get success in business or work. Other skills are important like leadership, communication skill, and so on. For instance, Dhirubhai Ambani was not very wel in maths but he became sucessful businessman. Other skills and other subjects knowledge are required to work in multinational companies. To conclude, I largely agree because, maths is very helpful in complex theory and solve large number of amount. While, not only knowledge about maths essential but also, other skills and subjects are very important.
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sucessful
in their life. Few
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maths
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in upcoming paragraphs.

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nowadays. By using
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maths
is
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very
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important
to solve the complex questions or large number of sums. In business,
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maths
is
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very
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important
part for loses and profit.
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Maths
is
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used
in everywhere like CA, Bank and
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many
more.
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Many
problems can be
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solve
by the
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maths
. Although, numerous multinational
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companies
are making large amount of product, by using mats to estimate how much product is in demand and how
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many
will
be sold
and benefit the
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company
.

In addition
, You can achieve your goal if you know the
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math
.
For example
, the great mathematics Arya
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Bhatt
was
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very
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famous
in the world. He
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know
about the
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maths
than he
is achieved
the success. He
is invented
of the zero digit.
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, he became a
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.
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can
easily
understand in mathematics.

To contrast,
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maths
is not essential to
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get
success in business or work.
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Other
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skills
are
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important
like leadership, communication
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skill
, and
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so
on.
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,
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Dhirubhai
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Ambani
was not
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wel
in
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he became
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sucessful
businessman.
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skills
and
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other
subjects knowledge
are required
to work in multinational
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companies
.

To conclude
, I
largely
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agree
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,
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maths
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helpful in complex theory and solve large number of amount. While, not
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only
knowledge about
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maths
essential
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also
,
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other
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skills
and subjects are
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IELTS essay To succeed in the business, one needs to know maths.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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