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To some people studying the past is the best way to help young people function well in the modern world.

To some people studying the past is the best way to help young people function well in the modern world. NVB9d
Some argue that comprehending history is the most effective approach to help young people operate in the present world's environment. However, while I believe that there are more productive methods, I completely agree that this technique has also beneficial developments. Firstly, studying the past certainly plays an important, if not the most important role in helping young people deal with today's world. For instance, exploring the history of their own country not only gives the pride in their own history and culture, but an understanding of why the business, financial or legal systems work as they do. They can then learn to judge what to protect and what to change. Learning antiquity can also assist to prevent people from making mistakes by showing them how events develop and mistakes occur, this will lead to them avoiding pitfalls in their lives. Last but not least, children could be Travelling informs the young about the world around them. Another method is to take educational exchanges between countries such as Russia and the UK, for example. In such exchanges, learning about the culture and history, the ways of doing things as well as learning the language take place. As a result, help young people deal with people from other countries as well. The best way is to make sure that all young people are equipped with the digital skills to study and find work in a highly competitive world. Even with these skills, understanding that comes from a study of culture and history both national is still needed, to survive and then not make the mistakes of the past. In conclusion, while there are obviously different ways to help people deal with modern life, an awareness of the past is probably the best means of doing so.
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is the most effective approach to
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help
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young
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operate in the present world's environment.
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agree
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also
beneficial developments.

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plays an
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important
, if not the most
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role in helping
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young
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people
deal with
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today
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, exploring the
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history
of their
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own
country not
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only
gives the pride in their
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own
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history
and culture,
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but
an understanding of why the business, financial or legal systems work as they do. They can then learn to judge what to protect and what to
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change
. Learning antiquity can
also
assist to
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prevent
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people
from making mistakes by showing them how
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events
develop and mistakes occur, this will lead to them avoiding pitfalls in their
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lives
.

Last
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but
not least, children could be Travelling informs the
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young
about the world around them. Another method is to take educational exchanges between countries such as Russia and the UK,
for example
. In such exchanges, learning about the culture and
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history
, the ways of doing things
as well
as learning the language take place.
As a result
,
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help
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young
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people
deal with
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people
from other countries
as well
. The best way is to
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make
sure that all
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young
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people
are equipped
with the digital
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skills
to study and find work in a
highly
competitive world. Even with these
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skills
, understanding that
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comes
from a study of culture and
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history
both national is
still
needed, to survive and then not
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make
the mistakes of the past.

In conclusion
, while there are
obviously
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different
ways to
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help
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people
deal with modern life, an awareness of the past is
probably
the best means of doing
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IELTS essay To some people studying the past is the best way to help young people function well in the modern world.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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