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School should be just provide education

School should be just provide education 06RO3

Host of us are too-well aware that some people want their school time to be more enjoyable while others claim that school should be provide just education programs. I agree with the first idea. There should be out door activities so undergraduates will get rejuvenated. In order to achieve this priority there should be great facilities. Human being are meant to be in the nature and spending time out door will helps to remedy their problems by allowing them to move freely to improve their posture and well-being by doing this students won't have stress and mentall problems. Moreover, it should be mention that taking the pupil to museum and art exhibit as a part of curriculum is great. They will get to know the history of their country as well as it's culture and they will have a sense of appreciation for their country so they will understand the books very easily and it's more enjoying for them. Consequently, school should provide out door activities to help the students utilize their potential.

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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 want their school time to be more enjoyable while others claim that school should be Consider using the past participle "provided"?provided
provide
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 education programs. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. There should be out door activities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 undergraduates will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rejuvenated. In order to achieve this priority there should be great facilities. Human being are meant
 to be in the nature and spending time out door will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "help"help
helps
 to remedy their problems by allowing them to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
freely
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 their posture and well-being by doing Did you mean "these"?these
this
 students won't have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and Possible spelling mistake found.mentalmentallymen tallmental l
mentall
 problems. Moreover
, it should be Did you mean  "mentioned"?mentioned
mention
 that taking the pupil to museum and art exhibit as a part of curriculum is great. They will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to know the history of their country as well
 as it's Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).culture, and
culture and
 they will have a sense of appreciation for their country This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 they will understand the books This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
easily
 and it's more enjoying for them. Consequently
, school should provide out door activities to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 the students utilize their potential. 