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#Essay2 Many believe that living in a city offers advantages as compared to countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

#Essay2 Many believe that living in a city offers advantages as compared to countryside. GwXXg
In recent years, an increasing inclination to move to cities has been observed among people. I have a firm stance that cities have a cluster of benefits in contrast to villages. It is an impregnable fact that a majority of work opportunities are found out in cities. One most preponderant reason for this scenario is industry centralization in major metropolitan cities. Gurugram is an epitome in this regard as, during the last decade, almost every MNC in India has set up its office in the city. As a result of it, people’s overall living standard has also shot up owing to the handsome salary they receive therein. Consequently, cities render the utmost perk to their inhabitants, which is evidently absent in the case of the countryside as few industries are normally interested in expanding their businesses there. Living in major cities also has some additional merits. First and foremost is the premium quality medical service availability. This is to means that most reputed hospitals are largely present in big cities bestowing their citizens with prompt medical and health services. Another advantage is the availability of schools and colleges with a vast pedigree in imparting the high standard education. Finally, every town is equipped with a number of extra amenities, for instance, parks, gyms, and supermarkets within the walking distance, which enables folks to get instant services and relish recreational activities. To sum up, I reaffirm my opinion that the countryside is in no way a match to the quality of life experienced in cities due to several compelling reasons. I am hopeful that soon non-urban areas would also be adding some important amenities to their space. Total words: 276
In recent years, an increasing inclination to
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move
to
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cities
has
been observed
among
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people
. I have a firm stance that
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cities
have a cluster of benefits
in contrast
to villages.

It is an impregnable fact that a majority of work opportunities
are found
out in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
. One most preponderant reason for this scenario is industry centralization in major metropolitan
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
.
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Gurugram
is an epitome in this regard as, during the last decade, almost every
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MNC
in India has set up its office in the city.
As a result
of it,
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people
’s
overall
living standard has
also
shot up owing to the handsome salary they receive therein.
Consequently
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
render the utmost perk to their inhabitants, which is
evidently
absent in the case of the countryside as few industries are
normally
interested in expanding their businesses there.

Living in major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
also
has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
additional merits.
First
and foremost is the premium quality medical service availability. This is to means that most reputed hospitals are
largely
present in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
bestowing their citizens with prompt medical and health services. Another advantage is the availability of schools and colleges with a vast pedigree in imparting the high standard education.
Finally
, every town
is equipped
with a number of extra amenities,
for instance
, parks, gyms, and supermarkets within the walking distance, which enables folks to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
instant services and relish recreational activities.

To sum up, I reaffirm my opinion that the countryside is in no way a match to the quality of life experienced in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
due to several compelling reasons. I am hopeful that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
non-urban areas would
also
be adding
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
amenities to their space.

Total words: 276
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IELTS essay #Essay2 Many believe that living in a city offers advantages as compared to countryside.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
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