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To solve traffic jams, mass transit systems are a better choice.

To solve traffic jams, mass transit systems are a better choice. MM0gN
Nowadays, traffic jams is one of the biggest problem that many people care about. There are several ways to solve it. For me, I wholeheartedly agree with mass transit systems. Above all, the construction of a public transport system is esstential in every country. Especially in major citities, mass transit systems would be more efficent and economical. It also reduce enviromental pollution. For example, peak hour traffic is made up largely each day because of staff from companies go to work and come home. This systems will help people get out of traffic congestion. Secondly, using this approach will advocate for less land for parking. Roadway will be wider and reduce the road congestion. Furthermore, accidents will become less than it used to be. To sum up, mass transit systems are a better choice for road users. However, cititzens should always obey the traffic law. Otherwise, we will pay substanial fines.
Nowadays,
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traffic
jams is one of the biggest problem that
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many
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people
care about. There are several ways to solve it. For me, I
wholeheartedly
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agree
with mass transit systems.

Above all
, the construction of a public transport
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system
is
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esstential
in every country.
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in major
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citities
, mass transit
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systems
would be more
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efficent
and economical. It
also
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reduce
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enviromental
pollution.
For example
, peak hour
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traffic
is made
up
largely
each day
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because
of staff from
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companies
go to work and
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come
home.
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This
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systems
will
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help
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people
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get
out of
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traffic
congestion.

Secondly
, using this approach will advocate for less land for parking. Roadway will be wider and
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reduce
the road congestion.
Furthermore
, accidents will become less than it
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used
to be.

To sum up, mass transit
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systems
are a better choice for road users.
However
,
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cititzens
should always obey the
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traffic
law.
Otherwise
, we will pay
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substanial
fines.
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IELTS essay To solve traffic jams, mass transit systems are a better choice.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
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