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Technology play a better role in international market.it is true.

Technology play a better role in international market. it is true. 85rWm
Technology is impacted every aspects of human life and shopping is become major source to using it, other argues that advancement of technology play a negligible role on their life. There are umpteen numbers od reason to support my notion that internet and social media become a substantial for all human being and convienence for shopping, however, online business is become vogue with the help of technology and convey every information with in a snap of a finger. A part from that masses can escalate own business to sell their products without any extra staff and space for store. For example, in recent survey found that in India, covid 19 become a big issue for all human's life as a result individual can stay at home and buy products through online shopping. On the other hand, there are various of pitfall ecommence. online shopping can shows a negative effect for both buyers and sellers owing to the fact that hacking, indentity theft and counterfiet products is a big issue for both and other scams will be taken.
Technology
is impacted
every
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aspects
of human life and
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shopping
is
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become
major source to using it, other argues that advancement of technology play a negligible role on their life. There are umpteen
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numbers od
reason to support my notion that internet and social media
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become
a substantial for all human being and
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convienence
for
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shopping
,
however
, online business is
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become
vogue with the
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help
of technology and convey every information with in a snap of a finger. A part from that masses can escalate
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own
business to sell their products without any extra staff and space for store.
For example
, in recent survey found that in India,
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covid 19
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become
a
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big
issue for all
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human's
life
as a result
individual can stay at home and
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buy
products through online
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shopping
.
On the other hand
, there are various of pitfall
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ecommence
.
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online
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shopping
can
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shows
a
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negative
effect for both buyers and sellers owing to the fact that hacking,
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indentity
theft and
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counterfiet
products is a
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big
issue for both and other scams will
be taken
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IELTS essay Technology play a better role in international market. it is true.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
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