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To learn a foreign language successfully, it is important to spend timein the country where the language is spoken. Do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 120 words

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Learning languages is a relevant, highly debatable topic nowadays. Among the strategies of learning the language, one of the most controversial is if it is necessary to live in a country whith native speakers or it is possible to raise level effectively in the country of one's mother tongue. There are arguments supporting both sides but I strongly believe it is possible to learn a foreign language without living in the country of its origin or use. It is widely considered a myth that learning a new language can be done more efficient only with a native speaker being a teacher. That is why a common misconception - if I go there and live there, I will soak up the language passively by just being there - often occurs. But in fact, it is not true. It was shown by lots of success stories that not only a non-native English teacher can provide even more professional sources for a student to grow, but also just spending time in the country does not result with learning the language. To learn the language a person needs to actively study it, broaden vocabulary, practice grammar, develop reading and speaking skills, do listening in different contexts, etc. This is what should be beared in mind. Secondly, language learners can artificially imitate the surrounding around them by watching films, participating in lessons, reading books or news, finding a pen pal for practicing the language of their interest. It has the same effect as going abroad and if done regularly, proper and with some sufficient effort it will undoubtedly bring result quite soon and even cheaper than living abroad. To summarise, I believe, that it is not a must to live abroad to succeed in mastering a language. Being proficient and raising the level of a language can be done by thoroughly paying attention to the language, practising it and creating a similar to another country amount of language input and output.
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languages
is a relevant,
highly
debatable topic nowadays. Among the strategies of
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learning
the
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language
, one of the most controversial is if it is necessary to
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live
in a
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country
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whith
native speakers or it is possible to raise level
effectively
in the
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country
of one's mother tongue. There are arguments supporting both sides
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but
I
strongly
believe it is possible to learn a foreign
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language
without living in the
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country
of its origin or
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use
.

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widely
considered a myth that
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learning
a new
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language
can
be done
more efficient
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only
with a native speaker being a teacher.
That is
why a common misconception
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if I go there and
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live
there, I will soak up the
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language
passively
by
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just
being there
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-
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often
occurs.
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But
in fact, it is not true. It
was shown
by lots of success stories that not
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only
a non-native English teacher can provide even more professional sources for a student to grow,
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but
also
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just
spending time in the
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country
does not result with
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learning
the
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language
. To learn the
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language
a person needs to
actively
study it, broaden vocabulary, practice grammar, develop reading and speaking
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skills
, do
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listening
in
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different
contexts, etc. This is what should be
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beared
in mind.

Secondly
,
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language
learners can
artificially
imitate the surrounding around them by watching films, participating in lessons, reading books or news, finding a pen pal for practicing the
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language
of their interest. It has the same effect as going abroad and if done
regularly
, proper and with
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some
sufficient effort it will
undoubtedly
bring result quite
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soon
and even cheaper than living abroad.

To
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summarise
, I believe, that it is not a
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must to
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live
abroad to succeed in mastering a
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language
. Being proficient and raising the level of a
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language
can
be done
by
thoroughly
paying attention to the
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language
,
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practising
it and creating a similar to another
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country
amount of
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language
input and output.
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IELTS essay To learn a foreign language successfully, it is important to spend timein the country where the language is spoken.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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